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A girl and a doctor, in a blue box,
Two other boys, hot on their socks.
One with a guitar, to help them see,
The other behind him, drinking tea.

A girl with the army, and an dalek called Lars.
And another with torchwood, keeping aliens behind bars.
The boys never seem to give up their chase,
Causing the doctor always to make haste.

One of the boys, thinks himself quite a sleuth,
When the other asks what they’re searching for,
The other simply replies…
“TRUUUTH!”<b>
My entry for :icongirl-on-the-moon:'s "Search for the truth" contest.

I'm not really expecting to do very well.
But in any case, check her out! Especially her "Search for the Truth" comics (and all those assosciated with it)

TRUUUTH!
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Arcalian Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009
The TRUUUUTH is that this is hella funny!
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Leo-the-fox Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009   Writer
Thank you very muchly.
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WickedWriter Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
This is a very cute poem. Very catchy. :D
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:iconleo-the-fox:
Leo-the-fox Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009   Writer
Heh, thankies.
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Natanya666 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009
i like it! especially the ending:)
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Leo-the-fox Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009   Writer
Yeah, the ending's meant to really be the best bit. :)

Thanks.
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TippySingleton Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009
hehehe Nice!
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Leo-the-fox Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009   Writer
Cheers. ^ ^
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TippySingleton Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009
sorry hate to be picky but re-reading it i noticed something.

When the other asks what they’re searching for,
The other simply replies…
“TRUUUTH!”

both are called "the other"
mabe a litle word switchie there. but hey, i needed to re-read it to notice. still an awesome poem.
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Leo-the-fox Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009   Writer
Heh
I know they're the same kinda thing.

It's intended, really, as I don't wish to use names, it makes them appear as more of a collective. (It's only recently in SftT that the two gents have been seperated)
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